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What do you think of this paragraph?
The place that the Curtalsons chose was right on the lake. The lake’s name was Whispering Willow. It got its name because there are a lot of willows around that go “swish swish” in the air as though they were singing a sweet melodic tune in the wind. The place was quite airy and spacious. It had 2 floors plus a loft. The girls decided immediately that they were going to take the loft. The parents took the master bedroom on the second floor. The spacious cabin also looked spacious because the artwork and rustic looking curtains that laced the windows like a fine layer of icing sugar on a cake. The cabin overlooked the lake plus a small sandy beach that would be used for all of the waterfront activities that the Curtalsons had planned for the girls.
It a paragraph that I wrote for a story.
That’s pretty good and it sounds like an interesting story, I would change a few minor things so it flows a little better.
The first two sentnces could be joined together, something like:
The place that the Curtalsons chose was right on Whispering Willow lake.
also, this bit was probably just a typing error:
The cabin looked spacious because of the artwork and rustic looking curtains
Great stuff, keep it up 
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